Thread:509894/@comment-25356578-20141015114014/@comment-509894-20141019140937

I really appreciate it. And yes, I do need to fix a few narrative errors and delete unecessary parts from my story. Plus, you're right. The part of Selina saying that her daughter is going to be the most powerful person in the world sounded melodramatic and Snow White premonition. I'm still editing it. I hop you enjoyed.